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Post by blackie on Nov 15, 2009 20:50:58 GMT -5
Name: Jay (jayfeather)
Age:
Gender: tom
Pelt Color: Brown with rings of black.
Description: Jay is a short fur brown and black cat. His fur is the like the silkiest of brown fur. His marking is vivid circles and spots of black which look of the splash of a puddle during the heaviest rain, and strips of black that line his chest and legs. His lengthy body makes him a fast runner and his nose as it is little is acute to most smells. His eyes are the color of the golden leaves in Leaf Fall. His tail is long with large black pattern spots down it.
Personality: For starters let say that he is not totaly a nice kind understanding type of cat. he tends to act out and dose get in fights alot with kittypets and sometimes a clan cat.
Desired Position: Right now Loner (soon to be a riverclan warrior)
Desired Clan: loner (Soon riverclan)
Picture of Cat (if you have one):
RP Example: Massive storm clouds loomed over head. There would no doubt be a pretty decent shower before the day was over. The day had started out like any other for Nightpaw. The only diffrence was that today she would be out of the nursery. Today she was going to be assesed by Riptalon the deputy. A smile spread across her face as she groomed herself while preparing her mind for this task. Of course it was hard to focus with her two sons wrestling around her. They were getting stronger everyday. She was so proud of them, and there cousins. They would make fine warriors one day. She let out a sigh full of sorrow. Her mentor Blackheart hadn`t lived long enough to see her kits, or even this assesment today. She had only been training with her for four moons before she died of Greencough. Then Ashpatch had come into her life, and it turned over and flew into a new unexpected direction. Her old focused self had all but been blocked in one night after they had confessed there love for one another. Then with her many little kits to watch over her life however happy it was, had been taking care of them. For at least a moon or more she had longed, her paws itching to feel the earth under her paws and the thrill of hunting once more. When Riptalon had told her about the test she nearly burst with joy. Finally she would be able to gain her name, and become a full warrior, and on top of that she wouldn`t be an apprentice with the kits. That would have been a little embarrassing, even for her. She had never really doubted her choice before when she had decided to put off her training, but now she was glad to have teh chance again. She loved her family dearly but what sane cat would want to spend more than a few moons with playful energetic kits without a small break. Besides it wasn`t like the toms could actually fully understand anyway. (this is from another site)
Clan History :
Jaykit: He was born in a liter of two. His parents were Flamingembers, and Searingheart. His brother was Shroudedhope, and he was also the second born, so he was the youngest of the two if only by minutes. As kits they always strived to best eachother, but there parents weren`t the nicest in the forest, so they would encourage things like drawing blood and using your claws. They never really got hurt much at all, and they were really close as brothers. They weren`t evil, in fact they were very friendly.
Jaypaw: When they became apprentices they were split up, so they barely saw eachother. His brother was given there father as a mentor because the warriors were short at the time, and Jaypaw got an older tom called Lionfang. He taught him the ways of justice,and how to properly act as a warrior.
Jayfeather: Amazingly with there training schedules they never saw eachother unil the day they became warriors. His brother was evil, and scarred badly. His heart sank at the sight. His once friendly and loving brother was gone. The next day his brother challenged his to a death battle to prove who the better son was. When he refused he was attacked anyway. There parents watched while they fought, one to avoid and one to kill. The current deptuy, which happened to be Jayfeathers mentor Lionfang arrived and tried to intervene and stop his brother. His parents and brother attacked him together and Lionfang killed both his parents. His brother escaped into the forest. Jayfeather stood there with his heart shreaded. His poor mentor was dying slowly from loss of too much blood. He told him that he had been chosen as the next deputy,and then died.
Jay: He couldn't handle the clan anymore. They seened evil, and he ran into the forest swearing one day to return to kill his older brother. Now he trains, the tougher he is the more easyer he can kill. He has killed many now and is back... in revenge.
(after i made the whole bio i relised that there is a jaypaw/ cat in the book.. i think he blind I haven't read any of them books yet :/ umm so idk if thats his name but if i have to change it i will then.)
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Post by Snowstar on Nov 19, 2009 18:11:01 GMT -5
I LOVE HIM!
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Post by blackie on Nov 19, 2009 18:42:33 GMT -5
lol
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Post by Strawberryfur on Nov 20, 2009 9:32:43 GMT -5
hes accpted ^^
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